Thursday, November 12, 2009

Give Them Choice and Controversy

John Bonner
English 102-009
Christy Vance
11/12/09
Give Them Choice and Controversy
When it comes to teaching students, it has always seemed to me that you need controversy to form personal opinion. First you start with the foundation of both arguments, as to build the background, and then you have to pose a question in regards to the foundation you just taught. This process creates questions and with any luck an answer or opinion is formed.
Now why is it that in all public schools we do not teach both sides of the argument of Evolution vs. Creationism? I want to begin in saying that I understand the usefulness of teaching Evolution and I am in no way going to argue that we should not teach it. The lessons that can be learned from Evolutionism are essential to our educational growth.
Evolutionist, and myself included, have had a lot of reasons for fighting against the teaching of Creationism. Just to get the obvious out of the way, the Bible or the myths that followed have almost no scientific base and are almost completely irrational, so thus they shouldn’t be taught on that reason alone. What I want to look at is the underlying facts of creationism. To look at a system that solely teaches Creationism can be found in church youth groups.
In an article by Bradi Noriega, she described how to make your youth group better or more effective. As I read this article I started noticing strange similarities with how warrior based cultures transformed the youth. I have personally experienced this gathering and can say, with remorse, that after words I immediately regretted attending. In Noriega’s article she explained the teaching template, first you gather all the local children of the same faith. Secondly you get them to play games that build camaraderie with one another. Then after these children have bonded, you stop the game, gather them in a circle, and teach them your interpretation of the Bible. Along with the lesson of the Bible they, unfortunately, also teach who to dislike.
Compare this template to that of the Romans around 40 BC. I have just recently read a novel by Conn Iggulden that told of the life of Julius Gaius Cesar, most notably is his childhood. During his childhood he would venture to Rome with his father and while there he would take part in an important tradition. He would gather with all the local children and wrestle and race their horses, afterwards they would be taught lessons in fighting, war, and theology. So like youth groups, you build camaraderie and teach them biased interpretations.
If John Locke, a 19th century philosopher, is correct in thinking that we are all born with blank slates, and that whatever we are taught we come to believe is fact. No matter what is taught, whether it is that all Carthaginians are evil or that God created everything. If we in fact are born with blank slates then it is more than important that what we take in should be considered valuable and recommended.
In defense of teaching creationism, one should look at the morality factor. In other words I believe that teaching creationism would give lessons in morality to those who can’t justify moral actions on their own. Hence to a rational person you just don’t steal and murder, for it is wrong, but to some they need to be told that it is a sin to murder and steal.
There really is no conclusion to this question of what and how you should teach, all I can do is present the facts and let you decide for yourself. With that you should also consider a resolution that was passed by the United Nations. It was called the Rights of Children under Article 14, it stated that children be allowed the freedom of religion. With that freedom of religion come freedom of choice, so let us give it to them. If we give the children an unbiased teaching atmosphere they are more likely to form their own opinions.

2 comments:

  1. I liked how you presented your facts and in the end left the decision up to the reader. prett effect method. Should have thought of that for my own OpEd. Great itroduction for your source because it gave crediablitity to your information in short amount of words. I could clearly see where stance feel on the issue. But as the advocate if you want the child to form thier opinion then shouldn't both sides be taught unbiasly. If only one side is presented then how can the child make a determination in what to believe and not to believe. I bel;ieve in a well rounded education but that can only truly happen if all sides are presentred equally and unbiasly. as we children we are extremely influenced by our parents, teachers and peers.
    Good job!

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  2. Your organization is pretty good in at least the order ideas are presented in. It could use a little cleanup on the level of individual paragraphs. -And a few gramatical fixes. Your stance was very clear, but still presented as a bit too bipolar. Perhaps try to use an even more neutral (as in "in the middle") position between evolution and creation rather than swinging back and fourth between them. And, instead of defending and attacking creationism in the same breath, try to take what is good about it and what is negative about it, spread that out a little more, and show how teacing evolution would (I guess) balance it out with its own positives and negatives.
    Overall you still focus on creationism without clarifying why it is also important to teach evolution, nor how they would work in conjuntion. I could easily say, "Leave the bible myth out of school. It contradicts and confuses the issue of evolutin by claiming that it itself it the only truth. Morality can be conveyed in other ways than bible stories. Or, morality should be taught through parental guideance and socail interacion, not a class at school."
    The sources were pretty well introduced, although actually mentioning the names of the books/articles might be good.

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